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English - Writing
How many pieces can you contribute? Are you always using your best handwriting? How often are you remembering the Non-Negotiables?
THE MAGIC BOX
Wow! You guys have written some lovey The Magic Box poems. Well done all of you. If you haven't sent yours in make sure you do as we have loved reading them.
Expanded noun phrases
Jake has demonstrated a good understanding of expanded noun phrases.
Bara has been working hard to improve the size of his writing and making sure it stays on the line. Keep up the great work Bara.
Here is Harry's story about Melvin the snail:
Here is Jason's story:
Here is Lois's story:
Here is Ayla's story:
Finn has made some bullet points to help him plan his 600 word story this week.
Jakub has planned his letter to Jake:
Ayla has planned her letter to Natalia:
100 Word Challenge
Here is Harry's story about abandoned treasure. 10HP
Here is Finn's. Super expanded noun phrase and variation in sentence structure Finn! 10HP
Here is Jason's entry. 10HP Jason!
Here is Lois's diary entry for Wednesday. She's really missing her friends. Why not drop her an e-mail? 10HP Lois