English - Writing
Friday 27th March 2020
I'm continuing to receive in some beautiful writing! I'm so proud of how hard everyone is working on their handwriting and presentation too.
I really love getting through diary sentences. I enjoy hearing about your day so much and this is a lovely way of telling me. Well done to Henry for his fantastic sentences! 30HP! On Monday, can you write me ten sentences telling me about your weekend?
Matilda has also told me all about her day. Thank you so much! What wonderful writing too! She's used so many adverbs of time! Can you spot them all? 30HP Matilda!
Matilda has been working super hard, because she has also created a storyboard based on chapter two of 'Danny The Champion of The World'! You have been working wonderfully on your home learning, Matilda! Another 30HP!
Sienna has been writing so much I'm surprised her pen hasn't run out! What a fantastic story, Sienna! I can see you've worked hard on including a lot of the criteria we use in class such as coordinating conjunctions, inverted commas and some wonderful powerful verbs! 30HP!
Thursday 26th March 2020
What amazing writers you all are! I'm so happy to receive all you diary entry sentences, door descriptions/stories and more. Well done, everyone!
Cleo has written a wonderful story. I spotted powerful verbs, conjunctions and expanded noun phrases. Fantastic! I loved how she described the scent of candy floss. I could smell it as I was reading it! 30HP
Henry has been practising his diary sentences and written a story. You've been working so hard. I must say, I adored the opening line of 'This door leads to a monster.' It really made me want to read on, and I had so many questions in my head as a reader! 30HP!
In school yesterday, we wrote our door stories as well! Maiya worked so hard on her one and had some amazing description included. I love how she described 'the bitter, cold air' and the howling wind. It really set the atmosphere! 30 HP, Maiya!
Sophie has been doing extra writing as well, practising her setting descriptions. What a superstar! 30HP!