English - Writing
Sophia G's punishment seems gruesome! But I love it!
Mia decided to record her advert - I love the music she has added to it! It gives it a great effect.
Here is Sam's published advert - I am impressed! If I was in the market for one, I think I would definitely be persuaded to buy it!
Well done Sophia H, great use of grammar to improve your sentences!
Mia has been thinking back to our dragon topic - look at the leaflet she has made!
Sam and Sophia H have planned their adverts for medieval punishment instruments (10HP).
Check out Cerys' and Lotte's adverts! Looking fab girls 10HP
Here is Stanley's Advert...anyone want to buy pillories? Anyone?... Anyone...? 10HP
Ella has been super busy again!
Lotte worked hard to edit and improve her adverts from Tuesday's writing activity!
Sam has had a go at persuading people to join in with Joe Wicks every morning - will this advert get you up and moving? At 9am?! Well done Sam, 10HP
Sophia H has been busy with her writing! Some fabulous advert reflections and some persuasive writing of her own. 10HP
Lilly Mai is trying to persuade us to have chocolate brownies!
Stanley decided to get creative with his adverts and used powerpoint! I think they look FAB! Well done! 20HP
Here is Lotte's advert. She has used a great rhetorical question as an opener - that will definitely hook the reader in! 20HP
Ella has been soooooo busy completing her work today! I am really impressed with how much effort she has put in - check out her self assessment of the writing success criteria! 30HP Ella! You go girl!
Sam is super proud of his writing work this morning. He has been thinking about persuasive language used in adverts! Keep an eye out for adverts on the TV today, can you spot any persuasive language?
I think Stanley really enjoyed looking at the adverts today! Look how much he has written! 20HP