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English - Writing
06/07/2020 - 10/07/2020
29/06/2020 - 03/07/2020
22/06/2020 - 27/06/2020
15/06/2020 - 19/06/2020
08/06/2020 - 12/06/2020
01/06/2020 - 05/06/2020
Stanley's news report is bound to make you laugh!
Here is Cerys' news report - so well edited! Well done :D
Lotte, Sophia H and Ella have finished their news reports!
Sam and Lotte have made a start on their writing for this week
18/05/2020 - 22/05/2020
Lotte loved looking at colloquial language!
Sophia H has begun looking at our poetry for this week.
11/05/2020 - 15/05/2020
Here is some of Scarlett's non chronological report - such amazing presentation!
Sophia H has made a great start on her non chronological report.
Lotte has been busy planning her non-chronological report.
04/05/2020 - 07/05/2020
Here is Cerys' play script - Jack and the Jelly Bean!
Lotte has included lots of different scenes in her playscript
Sophia H's playscript
Sam has turned his playscript into a video for us all.
Lotte has chosen Rapunzel for her playscript. Great choice!
27/04/2020 - 01/05/2020
Stanley wrote instructions on how to play Fortnite. I bet these will be popular!
Sophia H's instructions on how to keep your parents happy!
Lotte's final instructions look fab! She used Adobe Spark to create them.
Lilly has been busy with her nasty writing
Sam's instructions for Chocolate fudge cake YUM!
Stanislaw is making good progress with his instructions
Planning mode activated - Well done Lotte
The start of Stanislaw's instructions
Lotte has made a great start on her instructions!
20/04/2020 - 24/04/2020
Here is Sam's story
Great story using onomatopoeia, well done Sophia H!
Mia has blown me away with her story!
Another great start from Sophia H! I am so excited to read the finished stories on Friday!
Here is Stanley's story introduction. I can see how hard he has worked to meet the success criteria! It is fab :D
Lotte has started her story and managed to include some great description.
Sophia G has been busy practising her fronted adverbials :)
Sophia G's punishment seems gruesome! But I love it!
Mia decided to record her advert - I love the music she has added to it! It gives it a great effect.
Here is Sam's published advert - I am impressed! If I was in the market for one, I think I would definitely be persuaded to buy it!
Well done Sophia H, great use of grammar to improve your sentences!
Mia has been thinking back to our dragon topic - look at the leaflet she has made!
Sam and Sophia H have planned their adverts for medieval punishment instruments (10HP).
Check out Cerys' and Lotte's adverts! Looking fab girls 10HP
Here is Stanley's Advert...anyone want to buy pillories? Anyone?... Anyone...? 10HP
Ella has been super busy again!
Lotte worked hard to edit and improve her adverts from Tuesday's writing activity!
Sam has had a go at persuading people to join in with Joe Wicks every morning - will this advert get you up and moving? At 9am?! Well done Sam, 10HP
Sophia H has been busy with her writing! Some fabulous advert reflections and some persuasive writing of her own. 10HP
Lilly Mai is trying to persuade us to have chocolate brownies!
Stanley decided to get creative with his adverts and used powerpoint! I think they look FAB! Well done! 20HP
Here is Lotte's advert. She has used a great rhetorical question as an opener - that will definitely hook the reader in! 20HP
Ella has been soooooo busy completing her work today! I am really impressed with how much effort she has put in - check out her self assessment of the writing success criteria! 30HP Ella! You go girl!
Sam is super proud of his writing work this morning. He has been thinking about persuasive language used in adverts! Keep an eye out for adverts on the TV today, can you spot any persuasive language?
I think Stanley really enjoyed looking at the adverts today! Look how much he has written! 20HP